Tuesday 4 January 2011

Magpie Tales#47

Willow presents a puzzling prompt this week . . .
It's a . . . . or is it?



A Magpie blogpoet called Freud
said "This is one prompt to avoid!
It's quite weird, almost formless.
The sculptor was gormless -
Now Tess will be really annoyed!"

A much wiser blogger said "Sure?
The sculpt really isn't obscure!
It's three figures entwining.
Cad with Ada reclining -
Note, Trellissimo, nothing impure!" 



Meanwhile, in another place, Caddoc posted his version...




Plea To Humanity

Build a human tower,
give it strength to live
and learn to work together,
to pardon and forgive
the petty altercations
that block the way to peace,
until a world emerges
in which all warrings cease.



And Ada posted hers...


 Is This An Example Of The Black Arts? 

  
Bodies? I'm not sure
of impure
Human Grooves
as implied
by limbs
in knots, tied
together - HerS? HimS?
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20 comments:

  1. Anonymous4 January 2011 at 18:52

    Now this is becoming intriguing - I think somebody referred to Trellissimo as being a "pet" in a comment - but this post implies something slightly more, surely you don't, no you can't - not in Abergele!

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  2. Trellissimo4 January 2011 at 19:01

    Madame . . I did suggest they decamp to Colwyn Bay, well away from outraged Abergelonians.

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  3. *4 January 2011 at 22:09

    I'm with you on the oddness of this prompt, haven't written it yet, a bit daunted! Way to have a go at it! :)

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  4. girl daydreaming4 January 2011 at 22:47

    it's kind of nice to not know for sure... it leaves so much room for poetry...

    great poem... intriguing!

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  5. Maureen Newman5 January 2011 at 01:07

    Sometimes it is easier to let your mind float and simple put pen to paper - or fingers to keys. I like the chatter!

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  6. R. Burnett Baker5 January 2011 at 03:29

    Clever, clever, clever! Enjoyed this fun take...

    Rick

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  7. annell45 January 2011 at 12:24

    Very nice! I liked it!

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  8. Cad5 January 2011 at 12:35

    Sometimes a third person simply helps calm the fighting instincts of the other two! :)

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  9. Kathe W.5 January 2011 at 16:03

    oh very fun! You never ever disappoint me!

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  10. Dave King5 January 2011 at 18:33

    Clever. I'm impressed.

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  11. jabblog5 January 2011 at 21:17

    Clever!

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  12. Unknown6 January 2011 at 00:38

    yeah, what Cad said :)

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  13. Reflections6 January 2011 at 04:31

    Clever take, ah but if not for the puzzle, what would be left for the words to express?

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  14. Everyday Goddess6 January 2011 at 15:41

    I love how this means so many different things to all the Magpier's! So fun!

    Very excellently written!

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  15. Tess Kincaid6 January 2011 at 17:41

    Clever. Very clever!!

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  16. Lolamouse6 January 2011 at 19:36

    this put a smile on my face! I didn't know what the h- it was for a couple of days either. I must confess, I read a few other Magpiers stories to see what they thought it was! Then I got inspired. Thanks for the comment.

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  17. Lyn7 January 2011 at 20:07

    I'm with the wiser blogger..permutations win! Fun!!

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  18. Lucy Westenra9 January 2011 at 07:39

    Another funny one! Good for you . . .

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  19. The Blog of Bee9 January 2011 at 22:26

    OMG a threesome! How clever of you!

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  20. The Blog of Bee9 January 2011 at 22:28

    Oh and thank you for the link comment - of course, had I typed in the correct URL we wouldn't have had that problem!!

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