Friday 21 January 2011

Evening Hymn And Last Post?

While it is still Friday, and therefore the right day for creating 55 words of wonder or wisdom for Mr Knowitall, I have done exactly that, to continue with the theme of Beloved's previous post...


Slippery Slopes

We figure skate across marital ice,
some results being less than nice,
as the figures inscribed fail to please
and sometimes bring us to our knees.

But when we’re ruled by rhyme and rhythm
our bodies perform, they’re lithe and lissome.
We pirouette to the dance of life,
me (Caddoc Trellis) and Ada my wife.
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8 comments:

  1. moondustwriter21 January 2011 at 19:02

    Marital Bliss (ters)
    sorry couldn't resist - I believe in marriage and longevity. Tho Ada appears a bit stearn :)
    thanks for pointing out my link thing

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  2. Katherine21 January 2011 at 20:24

    True words and beautifully writ

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  3. Jannie Funster21 January 2011 at 20:55

    Ice dance marriage
    (yes, the olde "institute you can't disparage")

    All the best to Ada and you!

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  4. Monkey Man21 January 2011 at 23:33

    Sounds blissful. My 55 is HERE.

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  5. Brian Miller21 January 2011 at 23:36

    keep dancing, just avoid the thin ice...

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  6. G-Man22 January 2011 at 02:49

    I guess I haven't any rhythm!!
    Most excellent 55
    Loved the analogy.
    Thanks for playing, and have a Kick Ass Week-End...G

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  7. RNSANE22 January 2011 at 03:58

    I suspect you two could win an Olympic gold medal!! Outstanding 55. Mine is at:
    http://rnsane.blogspot.com/2011/01/friday-flash-55-slimy-aphrodisiac.html#links

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  8. Kavita22 January 2011 at 07:00

    Aww.. keep dancing to the beats, my friend.. falling is part of the game.. it's how quickly you rise back that matters :)
    An excellent 55!!!!

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