Monday, 7 February 2011

Microfiction Monday #69

Susan at Stony River challenges us to construct a story/poem around this picture prompt, but in no more than 140 characters.

"Officer - have you seen my Caddoc? Wrinkly. Silly brown hat. I should have met him at 2."
"We lifted him at half past, Mrs.T. For loitering"

(140 characters . . I hope)
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20 comments:

  1. Anonymous7 February 2011 at 14:55

    Poor Cad!!

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  2. Cad7 February 2011 at 14:57

    I think this goes to show how unreliable the fairer sex can be, when it comes to telling the time...

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  3. Cad7 February 2011 at 15:00

    P.S. Ada - when are you coming to bail me out?

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  4. Diane7 February 2011 at 15:34

    Hahahahahhaaha! Love it!!! :O)

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  5. Peggy7 February 2011 at 15:50

    Lifted poor Cad.
    What for, I wonder?
    Good one!

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  6. Mrs.Trellis7 February 2011 at 15:59

    Bail you out, Caddoc? You must be joking . .

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  7. Dianne7 February 2011 at 16:29

    terrible things happen when you're late ;)

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  8. Deborah7 February 2011 at 17:06

    LOL!

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  9. jabblog7 February 2011 at 18:53

    Mrs T should keep better time then Cad wouldn't be so unjustly treated.

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  10. Doctor FTSE7 February 2011 at 19:20

    I'm with Jabblog. The poor devoted man was probably there early so as not to be late for his Beloved, thus compounding the offence. But on second thoughts . . . suppose Mrs.T had turned up on time? The pair of them could have been done for soliciting - at their age! Oooerrr!

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  11. Pooch7 February 2011 at 19:25

    Therein lies quite a story! Cleverly done!
    :)

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  12. Jinksy7 February 2011 at 19:36

    Assignations under a clock? What have I walked into here? But thinking about it - could a legally married couple be done for soliciting? I think not, Doctor FTSE...

    Cad - you'd better buy the missus a mobile phone, so's you can gee her up for your next rendezvous if she shilly shallys again. Make sure it has a programmable alarm!

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  13. septembermom7 February 2011 at 21:33

    There is a story to be told here. Good job!

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  14. hope7 February 2011 at 23:13

    Oh that sounds like an awful Monday start. :)

    But it was fun to read!

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  15. Lisa Ricard Claro7 February 2011 at 23:16

    You made me laugh! Funny microfiction.

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  16. Susan Fobes8 February 2011 at 01:17

    Talk about a romance killer! Good one.

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  17. izzy8 February 2011 at 03:03

    loitering! Hmmm- suspicious- love his wrinkliness,
    thanks!

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  18. Elizabeth Mueller8 February 2011 at 03:21

    Lol! Great voice you got going here!

    ♥.•*¨ Elizabeth ¨*•.♥

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  19. Doctor FTSE8 February 2011 at 07:18

    Jinksy . . depends whether the police give them chance to explain before they start beating them senseless and hurling them into the back of the police van.

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  20. indicaspecies8 February 2011 at 08:51

    Haha...love it! The sense of humor in the comments as well...

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