Friday 15 April 2011

Shower Over,The Tale Continues...

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Cad’s lashes lifted, very gently, Ada stooping, evidently thought her husband might be dead, until his hand crept round her head pulled her lips towards his own, and Ada let a little moan escape her water spangled mouth, as Caddoc’s hands moved further south.
“Beloved, surely it is time for me to show you, love of mine, just how tenderly I’d woo you? Let us find a spot where we two may indulge our mutual passion. Love need not be on the ration !”
We’ll leave this drippy star-crossed pair to find their way up winding stair, perhaps to sip a glass of wine and reminisce about a time when nightly they affirmed their love and Ada cooed, Cad’s turtle dove... But hush – what’s this? Now she is screaming
”Caddoc, look at how this ceiling’s cracked and stained. It needs redoing – never mind your silly wooing -  and look how badly hung the door is, leaving gaps because the floor is more like rolling hills and dales! This house must be the worst in Wales when it come to decoration!”
“You fill me dear, with trepidation... But Ada, you’re not concentrating on our long neglected mating!”
So while these two are thus disporting, all peeping Toms must stop reporting...

Normal service will no doubt be resumed as soon as possible, after we drink a toast to Willow for her Magpie Prompt,  and remember, it's Day #15 over at Writer's Island.

18 comments:

  1. Cracked ceilings can be quite distracting :)

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  2. I smile and forget all my worries whenever I come to your blog :)

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  3. always fun to visit your blog!!!

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  4. I know I can count on smiling whenever I read your creations!!!

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  5. One must have the proper setting for a romantic evening, and a cracked ceiling and poorly hung door just won't do!

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  6. oh yeah!!!!
    With cracked ceiling, sensuality gets to escape through- yikes!!!

    very well spun!! Enjoy reading you.. :)

    Hugs xx

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  7. Lush! I can understand about the cracked ceilings - so off-putting!

    Anna :o]

    PS Well worth waiting for - the post that is - not the cracked ceiling!

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  8. Blooming Ada! I love the way this flows!

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  9. That Ada sure has a way with rhyme and flow... shame about that buzz kill stuff. As usual, quite entertaining. Vb

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  10. this is my first visit ~ i love it! the writing and the concept behind the blog.

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  11. There can't be many more ways for Ada to, how shall we say, deflate her husband's ego. Always entertaining.

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  12. hehehe! :D what a time to notice stuff! that was cool!

    My Magpie Post

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  13. cracked ceiling is superb line.

    visual and lovely.

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  14. Anything can lead to love..thank goodness! Would NOT want to be a peeping Tom for this occasion..pretty funny stuff!

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  15. This is hysterical, Trellissimo! It's your witty writing that makes it so much fun plus the down-to-earth truth espoused here. Sometimes wine isn't a guarantee!

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  16. Nice to know the love making is not kinky, evidenced by her 'cracked and stained' ceiling comment... Mmmm.. that she turned to be looking at the door and floor is a worry!

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